Post by swilz on Jan 24, 2008 20:04:50 GMT -5
ladies and gentlemen i am please to show you the first instalment of the novel: I HEART ME....
reader beware the following chapter contains swearing and scary dreams. Read if you dare. i am currently working on chapter 2...this is my first time writing in 1st person, so sorry if my tenses get mixed up.
She has been dead for a year now and yet I can still remember how it came about. I still fear that she won’t be there when I wake up…but I already know all to well that she won’t be there. No longer would I see Minnie Blacke’s squinty blue eyes. No longer would I feel her warm touch when she hugged me. Her laugh. Oh, how I would miss that ensemble of snorts and cackling. But what else would I expect from her? To just die and leave me alone. I knew long before her time came, she would leave in some way, shape or form. She wanted out and she got what she wanted. But I couldn’t blame her for getting what she wanted; I had to blame License Plate # X56 TW45. It was he who gave her what she wanted. A regular Santa Claus.
It was now when my eyes rested on the interior of the Gray Hound Bus. The leather, obviously not leather, smelled like booze, sweat, and urine. I crinkled my nose; I knew I should have brought my Fabreze©. I gagged silently. The leather was mud brown and was quite holey. I was off to meet my maker, which in the literal sense was true. I was going to meet my father, the one out of the two makers who managed to survive to take care of me. The only problem was that I hadn’t seen my father since I was six. I was now 16. And the last visit wasn’t what you’d expect. It wasn’t all sunshine and rainbows, go-lucky, and “daddy-daughter time”; it was all “Where the f**k is my child support money you bastard”. It was that kind of visit. With warming tones mixed with icy souls. Lovely, I assure you. Tornado season all over again. But you learn from the mistakes of your parents and I learned the following:
1) Never cheat on my significant other
2) Don’t get a divorce
3) Make sure to pay child support if other 2 promises were broken.
4) Drive safely, don’t drink excessively, and never drive after midnight, unless complete emergency
And my ultimate favorite:
5) Don’t die and leave your child alone to writhe in the agony in living with their other parent.
Hey, I think it’s a pretty d**n good plan, if I do say so myself.
So that was why I was making the big trek from sweet home Oregon, to Big Sky Country. That’s Montana incase you didn’t know. I had imagined a place where everything was perfect; where everything was in deep content. Yet all what Big Sky Country seemed to offer was a big sky with lots of rain clouds. And they said America was the “Land of Opportunity.” Opportunity I disagree. The American Dream was overrated too.
You might be thinking that I am an angry child. Well, I am. Of course I am, my mother is dead, and I am being forced to leave my home to live with someone I haven’t seen in 10 years. Let’s play therapist: How do your feel about your mother’s death Adalia? Sad? Angry? Happy? How about all of the above? The truth was that in a way I was happy at first that she was gone. But as it all sank in, I began to tear myself apart with the withheld sadness that doused my soul. And of course I felt anger, someone killed her; she didn’t kill herself . Besides, I’m a teenager, and teenagers are bratty, moody and sometimes very angry with the world.
Outside, the rain fell like iron bullets and pounded against my window. Lightning flashed; I held my purse closer to me, as if the thunder would come and steal it. Lightning and thunder were partners in crime. The lightning was the “distracter” dazzling the prey by flashing the artful streaks of light. The thunder scared the prey by trouncing them with the hateful booms that would make any little kid pee in their pants. They succeeded a few times, but that didn’t work on me… this time anyway.
Oldies rang through the silence of the bus. It was now when I could picture the Village People dealing out their massive pelvic thrusts. I fought to push that picture out of my mind. No matter how hard I pushed the image, I still had the urge to dance the YMCA.
There were miles of rode ahead, and I knew that no matter what, nothing was going to stop sympathy from rushing out of my father. And nothing was going to stop me from yelling at him that I was fine, and that I didn’t need sympathy.
I had been going to Portland High School when I lived in Oregon, but now times have changed. I finished up my sophomore year and started the series of long good-byes that lasted a whole summer. No one needed to remind me that my mother was gone. I didn’t need the “Sorry for your loss” crap. How could they be sorry? Were they part of the ploy that killed Minnie? Was it their fault that she lay six feet under in a mahogany casket? I didn’t think so, unless their license plate number was X56 TW45, which I doubt it is.
Another hour on the bus had come and gone, and my butt began to ache with immobility. I always hated that when it happened, so I sat in quiet agony, shifting when necessary. The storm had ceased, and the skies had cleared. About time, I thought to myself.
Exhaustion set in, and I felt my eyes droop. I felt like a slow computer that took awhile to set itself for sleep mode. For 10 minutes I waited for sleep demons to take me into dreamland; a place that I had not visited in a long time. Though my mind was frequently visited by nightmares, they never did replace the quiet solace of my dreams.
Before I knew it, I was asleep. Tantalizing thoughts danced in my mind, but I did not wake. Nothing could wake me from the everlasting slumber. And no, I was not dead, but I wished I were.
I was ninety-nine point nine percent sure that I was having some sort of dream. But then again, it seemed more real than all the others I have ever had. I could smell my sweat, and feel my heart beating beneath my chest. I felt my breath catch with each wavering inhale, and I knew at once this had to be real. It couldn’t though…where was the driver, the Oldies? I was confused. I slowly became aware that I was alone, and that I was cold. It was like the ninety-degree bus went through an ice age. I sighed; my breath could be seen clearly. My glasses fogged up with the chill. I stood up, knowing all to well that if I stayed put, I would freeze to death.
Shivers crawled up my spine as I heard a quiet giggle reverberate throughout the entire bus. Strange …but that giggle wasn’t all I heard, I heard a shuffle of papers up by the driver’s chair. Maybe I wasn’t alone after all
“Wh-wh-who’s there?” I called, but there was no answer. I rubbed hard at the lenses of my glasses to clear the fog. When I put them back on, I saw the world with new clarity. The bus remained empty.
It seemed like I had stood still forever, the world wasn’t moving with me, so all time stood frozen. It was like a coin just tossed, and I was still waiting for it to drop on heads or tails. The anticipation was high, and I growing anxious.
Step by uneasy step, I gradually tip-toed up the bus toward the driver’s seat. All was silent, and I thought I was just being paranoid. I thought so until I heard the voice.
“Adalia? Why don’t you come out and play?” The voice was like honey, but was trimmed with venom. I was tempted to walk forward, but something about the voice reminded me of something. Something of my past. I searched my mind, going through all my memories. It was then when my mind rested on a memory.
I was three when I awoke from a nightmare. What I remembered about the nightmare was that I was alone in my room when I awoke. Blood poured everywhere, and I was scared out my mind. But then I saw her. She looked like me and talked like me, but they ways we acted were different. She was, well pure evil, and I was the innocent three year old.
Her presence stayed with me from then on. Her nighttime visits haunting me. I even saw her in my reflection every so often. Then, suddenly, it all stopped. She stopped visiting me and I was at last able to catch some Z’s.
I soon flashed to another recollection. When I was 11, I remember in class we were learning about Greek myths. It was then we started the myth of Pandora’s Box; how, Pandora was given a box and that she was forbidden open. It contained all the evil in the world: death, lies, and deceit. The box and Pandora reminded me of myself, I was the box, and I opened myself. And with the opening of it came out my evil. So, I thought it made sense to call my evil Pandora.
“Adalia, what’s wrong?” the voice called, and the name I feared echoed within my soul. Pandora. She has returned at last. After 5 years of silence, she came back, with a stronger lust for my suffering.
I looked over the blue leather driver seat, there was nothing there. It was void of any being. I sighed heavily; perhaps this was just a dream. My gray Converse High-tops® were dappled with yellow lightning bolts, and they gripped the floor. They squeaked as I moved closer to the mirror. I looked up at myself, distraught in the glass, my eyes wide and chest heaving. But I was not the only one in the mirror.
Off my left shoulder I saw her. Her indigo eyes narrowed, but were dancing with mirth; nor did she wear glasses. She was up to something. Her jet black hair looked as if it hadn’t seen bath water in years. Her skin was gray, but firm. A grim smirk planted itself upon her face. She still looked like me, only her haggard features told the difference between us.
“Long time, no see, Adalia. I’d thought it be awhile before I’d get to torture you again,” I’d thought it’d be never again she would torture me. 11 years of my life were taken by her, no more needed to be taken. I slowly turned around until I was face to face with me. But it wasn’t me, it was Pandora.
“Why are you here?” I asked my voice faltering.
“To make up for lost time,” She bit her lip, trying to look innocent, but nothing was innocent about her. I felt fear well up in me, as I heard her words. Time wasn’t lost; all lost time had been found when she disappeared. Never did a day go by when I didn’t think about her. You never forget your fears.
“I-I- thought that y-y—
“Thought what?” She stared at me incredulously, “That I had left forever?” She snorted. “Of course I didn’t leave. Even tormenters have to take vacations.” A wicked smile planted itself across her face. And with that I found new strength at last reverberate through me.
“And what were you dong then on your ‘time off’” I scoffed; I took a step back from Pandora, the door lever now jabbing me in my back. I grimaced with the unwanted pain.
“Now do you really want me to tell you how I coursed through the shadows of the d**ned—
“Oh, so you were with family then?” I felt a cold glare cut close to my dignity.
“Adalia, Adalia, look at what’s happened to you since our last talk. You went and got yourself some courage; I do hope the wizard will be able to take that back.” She took once step closer to me, “If he doesn’t, then I will just have to do it myself,” She whispered the last words with a hint of venom. Her head slowly got closer to mine until we were a breadth apart. “Boo...” she said softly and pfft , she disappeared.
A sigh of relief escaped my lips. I slowly turned around, every inch of me shaking uncontrollably. My eyes widened as fear flooded my mind. The bus was moving. Fast. Trees and billboards streaked passed the windows. My breathing quickened. Everything happened so quickly. The bus crashed and I went headlong through the windshield. I should have stayed put; freezing to death would have been better than this.
reader beware the following chapter contains swearing and scary dreams. Read if you dare. i am currently working on chapter 2...this is my first time writing in 1st person, so sorry if my tenses get mixed up.
Chapter 1
The stupidity of Adalia
The stupidity of Adalia
She has been dead for a year now and yet I can still remember how it came about. I still fear that she won’t be there when I wake up…but I already know all to well that she won’t be there. No longer would I see Minnie Blacke’s squinty blue eyes. No longer would I feel her warm touch when she hugged me. Her laugh. Oh, how I would miss that ensemble of snorts and cackling. But what else would I expect from her? To just die and leave me alone. I knew long before her time came, she would leave in some way, shape or form. She wanted out and she got what she wanted. But I couldn’t blame her for getting what she wanted; I had to blame License Plate # X56 TW45. It was he who gave her what she wanted. A regular Santa Claus.
It was now when my eyes rested on the interior of the Gray Hound Bus. The leather, obviously not leather, smelled like booze, sweat, and urine. I crinkled my nose; I knew I should have brought my Fabreze©. I gagged silently. The leather was mud brown and was quite holey. I was off to meet my maker, which in the literal sense was true. I was going to meet my father, the one out of the two makers who managed to survive to take care of me. The only problem was that I hadn’t seen my father since I was six. I was now 16. And the last visit wasn’t what you’d expect. It wasn’t all sunshine and rainbows, go-lucky, and “daddy-daughter time”; it was all “Where the f**k is my child support money you bastard”. It was that kind of visit. With warming tones mixed with icy souls. Lovely, I assure you. Tornado season all over again. But you learn from the mistakes of your parents and I learned the following:
1) Never cheat on my significant other
2) Don’t get a divorce
3) Make sure to pay child support if other 2 promises were broken.
4) Drive safely, don’t drink excessively, and never drive after midnight, unless complete emergency
And my ultimate favorite:
5) Don’t die and leave your child alone to writhe in the agony in living with their other parent.
Hey, I think it’s a pretty d**n good plan, if I do say so myself.
So that was why I was making the big trek from sweet home Oregon, to Big Sky Country. That’s Montana incase you didn’t know. I had imagined a place where everything was perfect; where everything was in deep content. Yet all what Big Sky Country seemed to offer was a big sky with lots of rain clouds. And they said America was the “Land of Opportunity.” Opportunity I disagree. The American Dream was overrated too.
You might be thinking that I am an angry child. Well, I am. Of course I am, my mother is dead, and I am being forced to leave my home to live with someone I haven’t seen in 10 years. Let’s play therapist: How do your feel about your mother’s death Adalia? Sad? Angry? Happy? How about all of the above? The truth was that in a way I was happy at first that she was gone. But as it all sank in, I began to tear myself apart with the withheld sadness that doused my soul. And of course I felt anger, someone killed her; she didn’t kill herself . Besides, I’m a teenager, and teenagers are bratty, moody and sometimes very angry with the world.
Outside, the rain fell like iron bullets and pounded against my window. Lightning flashed; I held my purse closer to me, as if the thunder would come and steal it. Lightning and thunder were partners in crime. The lightning was the “distracter” dazzling the prey by flashing the artful streaks of light. The thunder scared the prey by trouncing them with the hateful booms that would make any little kid pee in their pants. They succeeded a few times, but that didn’t work on me… this time anyway.
Oldies rang through the silence of the bus. It was now when I could picture the Village People dealing out their massive pelvic thrusts. I fought to push that picture out of my mind. No matter how hard I pushed the image, I still had the urge to dance the YMCA.
There were miles of rode ahead, and I knew that no matter what, nothing was going to stop sympathy from rushing out of my father. And nothing was going to stop me from yelling at him that I was fine, and that I didn’t need sympathy.
I had been going to Portland High School when I lived in Oregon, but now times have changed. I finished up my sophomore year and started the series of long good-byes that lasted a whole summer. No one needed to remind me that my mother was gone. I didn’t need the “Sorry for your loss” crap. How could they be sorry? Were they part of the ploy that killed Minnie? Was it their fault that she lay six feet under in a mahogany casket? I didn’t think so, unless their license plate number was X56 TW45, which I doubt it is.
Another hour on the bus had come and gone, and my butt began to ache with immobility. I always hated that when it happened, so I sat in quiet agony, shifting when necessary. The storm had ceased, and the skies had cleared. About time, I thought to myself.
Exhaustion set in, and I felt my eyes droop. I felt like a slow computer that took awhile to set itself for sleep mode. For 10 minutes I waited for sleep demons to take me into dreamland; a place that I had not visited in a long time. Though my mind was frequently visited by nightmares, they never did replace the quiet solace of my dreams.
Before I knew it, I was asleep. Tantalizing thoughts danced in my mind, but I did not wake. Nothing could wake me from the everlasting slumber. And no, I was not dead, but I wished I were.
I was ninety-nine point nine percent sure that I was having some sort of dream. But then again, it seemed more real than all the others I have ever had. I could smell my sweat, and feel my heart beating beneath my chest. I felt my breath catch with each wavering inhale, and I knew at once this had to be real. It couldn’t though…where was the driver, the Oldies? I was confused. I slowly became aware that I was alone, and that I was cold. It was like the ninety-degree bus went through an ice age. I sighed; my breath could be seen clearly. My glasses fogged up with the chill. I stood up, knowing all to well that if I stayed put, I would freeze to death.
Shivers crawled up my spine as I heard a quiet giggle reverberate throughout the entire bus. Strange …but that giggle wasn’t all I heard, I heard a shuffle of papers up by the driver’s chair. Maybe I wasn’t alone after all
“Wh-wh-who’s there?” I called, but there was no answer. I rubbed hard at the lenses of my glasses to clear the fog. When I put them back on, I saw the world with new clarity. The bus remained empty.
It seemed like I had stood still forever, the world wasn’t moving with me, so all time stood frozen. It was like a coin just tossed, and I was still waiting for it to drop on heads or tails. The anticipation was high, and I growing anxious.
Step by uneasy step, I gradually tip-toed up the bus toward the driver’s seat. All was silent, and I thought I was just being paranoid. I thought so until I heard the voice.
“Adalia? Why don’t you come out and play?” The voice was like honey, but was trimmed with venom. I was tempted to walk forward, but something about the voice reminded me of something. Something of my past. I searched my mind, going through all my memories. It was then when my mind rested on a memory.
I was three when I awoke from a nightmare. What I remembered about the nightmare was that I was alone in my room when I awoke. Blood poured everywhere, and I was scared out my mind. But then I saw her. She looked like me and talked like me, but they ways we acted were different. She was, well pure evil, and I was the innocent three year old.
Her presence stayed with me from then on. Her nighttime visits haunting me. I even saw her in my reflection every so often. Then, suddenly, it all stopped. She stopped visiting me and I was at last able to catch some Z’s.
I soon flashed to another recollection. When I was 11, I remember in class we were learning about Greek myths. It was then we started the myth of Pandora’s Box; how, Pandora was given a box and that she was forbidden open. It contained all the evil in the world: death, lies, and deceit. The box and Pandora reminded me of myself, I was the box, and I opened myself. And with the opening of it came out my evil. So, I thought it made sense to call my evil Pandora.
“Adalia, what’s wrong?” the voice called, and the name I feared echoed within my soul. Pandora. She has returned at last. After 5 years of silence, she came back, with a stronger lust for my suffering.
I looked over the blue leather driver seat, there was nothing there. It was void of any being. I sighed heavily; perhaps this was just a dream. My gray Converse High-tops® were dappled with yellow lightning bolts, and they gripped the floor. They squeaked as I moved closer to the mirror. I looked up at myself, distraught in the glass, my eyes wide and chest heaving. But I was not the only one in the mirror.
Off my left shoulder I saw her. Her indigo eyes narrowed, but were dancing with mirth; nor did she wear glasses. She was up to something. Her jet black hair looked as if it hadn’t seen bath water in years. Her skin was gray, but firm. A grim smirk planted itself upon her face. She still looked like me, only her haggard features told the difference between us.
“Long time, no see, Adalia. I’d thought it be awhile before I’d get to torture you again,” I’d thought it’d be never again she would torture me. 11 years of my life were taken by her, no more needed to be taken. I slowly turned around until I was face to face with me. But it wasn’t me, it was Pandora.
“Why are you here?” I asked my voice faltering.
“To make up for lost time,” She bit her lip, trying to look innocent, but nothing was innocent about her. I felt fear well up in me, as I heard her words. Time wasn’t lost; all lost time had been found when she disappeared. Never did a day go by when I didn’t think about her. You never forget your fears.
“I-I- thought that y-y—
“Thought what?” She stared at me incredulously, “That I had left forever?” She snorted. “Of course I didn’t leave. Even tormenters have to take vacations.” A wicked smile planted itself across her face. And with that I found new strength at last reverberate through me.
“And what were you dong then on your ‘time off’” I scoffed; I took a step back from Pandora, the door lever now jabbing me in my back. I grimaced with the unwanted pain.
“Now do you really want me to tell you how I coursed through the shadows of the d**ned—
“Oh, so you were with family then?” I felt a cold glare cut close to my dignity.
“Adalia, Adalia, look at what’s happened to you since our last talk. You went and got yourself some courage; I do hope the wizard will be able to take that back.” She took once step closer to me, “If he doesn’t, then I will just have to do it myself,” She whispered the last words with a hint of venom. Her head slowly got closer to mine until we were a breadth apart. “Boo...” she said softly and pfft , she disappeared.
A sigh of relief escaped my lips. I slowly turned around, every inch of me shaking uncontrollably. My eyes widened as fear flooded my mind. The bus was moving. Fast. Trees and billboards streaked passed the windows. My breathing quickened. Everything happened so quickly. The bus crashed and I went headlong through the windshield. I should have stayed put; freezing to death would have been better than this.